Great topic!

Hi! Fantastic choice of topic, I just have a couple of small suggestions! Firstly, it would be nice to have a definition of Proportional Representation at the top of the page, as it is the focus of the page, then you could go on to describe First Past the Post & the Current Electoral system. I would maybe even add another sub-category for why Proportional Representation is favorable, as you mention that in your "Current Electoral System" section. Furthermore, commenting on the impact of Proportional Representation and women in government is fantastic, and I would love to see an expansion on that topic, or one similar, with some peer-reviewed articles! Again, great choice of topic and good work so far!

LaraGillatt (talk)06:55, 2 December 2018