Great topic!

Great topic!

Great topic! I'm very glad you picked this topic, I think it is so relavant to be imformed on this subject especially in light of the current BC electoral reform. As a suggestion, I think adding more peer reveiwed sources would be benefitial to your arguments. Also, maybe adding an infographic or picture would make the page more attractive looking too.

JadenWilles (talk)18:58, 29 November 2018

Hi! Fantastic choice of topic, I just have a couple of small suggestions! Firstly, it would be nice to have a definition of Proportional Representation at the top of the page, as it is the focus of the page, then you could go on to describe First Past the Post & the Current Electoral system. I would maybe even add another sub-category for why Proportional Representation is favorable, as you mention that in your "Current Electoral System" section. Furthermore, commenting on the impact of Proportional Representation and women in government is fantastic, and I would love to see an expansion on that topic, or one similar, with some peer-reviewed articles! Again, great choice of topic and good work so far!

LaraGillatt (talk)06:55, 2 December 2018