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Really unique topic! I found your information be really interesting, however, adding images throughout your page would have made the text more eye-catching as bodies of text alone may lose the attention of your readers. I think if you reorganized 'Racialized Sexism' in the beginning, it might make the paper overall more succinct as I found that that paragraph stuck out at the ending when it could have been introduced somewhere in your beginning thoughts. I would love to see you expand on specific cultures of interest and examine the different beauty norms out there.