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Hello, great work! I really liked how you broke the stigmas down one-by-one. It may also be helpful if you could introduce us to different stigmas across cultures, since I found the Kenyan example really intriguing. I don't really have any questions but I found some of your writing a bit ambiguous: "A healthy 30-year-old woman has about a 20 percent chance of getting pregnant each month with her chances dropping to about 5 percent a month." "It is possible a simple blood test to diagnose your issues and there’s the possibility of a minor medical procedure to fix it." And some very very minor grammatical mistakes "Sadly is a common misconception and does not help those affected." " in a way that makes people know that they are not alone and it isn’t their faults."

Cheers, Audrey