Talk:GRSJ224/infertility

Hello, great work! I really liked how you broke the stigmas down one-by-one. It may also be helpful if you could introduce us to different stigmas across cultures, since I found the Kenyan example really intriguing. I don't really have any questions but I found some of your writing a bit ambiguous: "A healthy 30-year-old woman has about a 20 percent chance of getting pregnant each month with her chances dropping to about 5 percent a month." "It is possible a simple blood test to diagnose your issues and there’s the possibility of a minor medical procedure to fix it." And some very very minor grammatical mistakes "Sadly is a common misconception and does not help those affected." " in a way that makes people know that they are not alone and it isn’t their faults."

Cheers, Audrey

Hi! Awesome job on the wiki page! This is a really important topic and I am glad you chose to write about this. I thought the content was great and nicely organized. I thought the format of the headings under "Myths" was really impactful and really helped with the flow of the page. One idea I had was to have more statistical/scholarly information under the "It's easy for women to get pregnant" and "infertile couples will never be happy or fulfilled" myth sections, as there are no sources there. As well, although you have a lot of sources, there aren't a ton of in text citations throughout the whole page, which will help readers locate where your information is sourced from. Thanks again for covering this topic, great work!