Compliments and Suggestions

Hello! I found your wiki topic very intriguing, as it is on a topic that I never really think of. As a kid, I never really watched superhero movies so this has opened my eyes!! I think your format and everything was great, and your research definitely supports your argument. But I found a few sentences that were either awkward or missing words. For example, it should say "is a strong point of debate" rather than "is strong point of debate." Additionally, in the character status part, there is an awkward sentence that you may want to consider revising - "the way that women are represented in this way." I feel like you don't need "in this way". Also, in the section about body image, you write "when researching ______, when I searched online." Again, I feel like you don't need "when I searched online" as the sentence seems a bit awkward. Also in body image, you write "this can cause problems by may lowering women's body esteem." I get what you are trying to say, but maybe some revision is necessary. I think your piece was really good and very insightful. You also definitely got your argument across!! My suggestions are just going through and reading it out loud and see if it makes sense!! Great job! :)