Possibly narrow topic a little?

Fashion and feminism was a very interesting article to read and I thought you did a great job recording changes in fashion over time. I feel like Fashion and Feminism might be a bit broad of a topic given the 1000 word limit. You seem to take not of this and focus on European and North American fashion and feminism. Given this I think it might make sense to narrow your topic down further? In this class we have learned how diverse cultures across the world are and that we can't approach the world with one perspective. While the US and Europe could be argued to be leading the feminist revolution there are still many locations that would need to be addressed given your title. Other than that you've done a really good job at what you set out to do.