Talk:GRSJ224/fashionandfeminism

Hello! very interesting topic. I liked how you included feminist fashion icons. I think that it would benefit your page if you included a few pictures for this section and the history section. Other than that, I thought that it was a very informative page.

I also think a few images would have made your Wiki Entry a little bit more interesting and engaging!

Hi Alexandra! I loved your topic especially as I wrote about the fashion industry myself. your categorization and summary of each time era was very well organized and allowed me to visualize the fashion better.I also liked how you mentioned several feminist designers in the fashion industry I really did not know half of these significant figures were feminist advocates. Your definition of feminism was also very concise. I think overall your wiki page is very interesting especially to me personally as I have always been interested in fashion!

Fashion and feminism was a very interesting article to read and I thought you did a great job recording changes in fashion over time. I feel like Fashion and Feminism might be a bit broad of a topic given the 1000 word limit. You seem to take not of this and focus on European and North American fashion and feminism. Given this I think it might make sense to narrow your topic down further? In this class we have learned how diverse cultures across the world are and that we can't approach the world with one perspective. While the US and Europe could be argued to be leading the feminist revolution there are still many locations that would need to be addressed given your title. Other than that you've done a really good job at what you set out to do.