Suggestions

Suggestions

Great Page! Although I knew that homosexuality and sports are conflictual when combined, I did not realize the media's role in the problem. It was interesting to me that the media simultaneously plays an inclusive and homophobic role in relation to sports players.

The information throughout your page is relevant to the themes of the course, and all of your links follow through, which is great. I would suggest renaming the first heading as it is the same as the title. In your title, I would also suggest that you remove "GRSJ 224/" as it appears awkward. Lastly, I would suggest reading through the page once and fixing any grammatical or sentence structure flaws.

JanviBhatia (talk)05:22, 29 November 2019