Comments on Sexualization of SororityWomen

Hello!

I enjoy your coverage on the topic and I think that your subheadings and titles are very coherent regarding your topic. Regarding the layout of the page, I think if you separate and categorize the topics under their own header it would provide further organization (ie. History separated from Statistics). Likewise, for References you can use the Wiki Cite function to have tagged hyperlinked citations, and it would automatically help you create your Reference List on the bottom too, rather than having to manually complete the citations.

In general, I think the topic you have chosen is very applicable to the environment we experience in our school lives especially in regards to media being a large part of our perception about what "sorority life" is like on campus. It is interesting that although sororities were initially created to empower female, it slowly allowed gender roles to be further segregated because of media exploitation and gender role ideologies. Your coverage on the topic is very thorough and I think you've done a great job in your research!