Could try and utilize the Visual Editor of the wiki page

Hi, nice work so far, but I have several suggestions regarding your page. First, I noticed you haven't presented your ideas in a Wiki page format. Utilizing the visual editor can make it easier for readers to comprehend your writing, here's the link to the guide! https://wiki.ubc.ca/Help:Visual_Editor Moreover, I think it would be better if you could give us more background information of the movement. Some info like the date/year it started, organizing committees, goal of the movement etc would help us understand your subsequent criticisms in a more well-rounded manner. Cheers, Audrey