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Hi there!

I enjoyed reading your wikipedia page - I think you did a really good job of explaining the discrepancies between mental health trends of migrants and Canadian-born people. In terms of improvement, some of your sections can get a little overly academic. As a wikipedia page is more of a general resource that's supposed to be accessible to all, you might want to consider simplifying the language or making it a little bit less dense, particularly in the social connectedness section. I'd also double check some of the citations - the last sentences of most of your paragraphs aren't cited, and I'm not sure if that's because the info comes from you or if you accidentally left out a source.

Overall, I thought you did a great job and reading your page gave me more insight into immigrant and refugee mental health.