Feedback on your Wiki post

Feedback on your Wiki post

Hello!

Great job on your wiki post, you were well researched and made compelling points that helped the reader understand mental health in the contexts of immigrants and refugees. One suggestion that I have is to be a bit more detailed on some of your points. For example, you state that immigrants arrive healthier compared to Canadian citizens. When you say healthier, is it in terms of mental health, physical health or both? Another area where you could expand more would be in the depression section of mental health. In the end, you inform the reader that immigrant women are at a 2-3x higher risk for post-partum depression compared to Canadian women. Being able to explain why this might be the case could strengthen your article even more. One last thing, at the time that I am writing this there are currently no pictures on your article. Pictures may keep the readers more engaged in your article and they provide some aesthetic. Thanks for your great contribution to the wiki!

HarrisWong (talk)09:32, 28 February 2019