Suggestion

Hi Spencer, You've got a really great topic for your wiki and some very interesting information! One thing I would suggest is that you try to tailor your information in a way that is consistent with the style of wikipedia pages. This unfortunately means that you probably don't want to say "I", because the purpose of a wiki page is to provide objective information. You also want to make sure that you don't have arguments or opinions in your wiki, as those kinds of things are better suited for essays. Note that our professor has suggested in an email that it "is not an essay, it is a wiki entry. Look at a few wikipedia entries if your are still unsure of the entry style." Just a suggestion! Good work so far :)