Suggestion

Suggestion

Hello! I really like your choice of topic!! I just have some technical/editing suggestions. The lead section provides a solid introduction into the importance of film in shaping society and people's perceptions, however I think it will strengthen it as a reflection of your argument and topic by including a summary of your wiki itself (depiction of immigrants). Also just a typo on Referrence = References.

Looking forward to reading your finished work.

MerriTan (talk)02:41, 28 July 2018