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This is a really strong topic that you have chosen for your wiki as I believe it is often undermined when looking at Hollywood films. I really like how you brought in the topic of female immigrants as well as it highlights the intersectionality in the matter. However, I feel like you should articulate that more as it can make your argument much stronger. Further, I would like to add another suggestion in providing more specific examples of immigrants being represented in Western Films to support your argument and offer evidence.

AbdelrahmanMegahid (talk)00:39, 2 August 2018