Comment/feedback

Your topic is extremely interesting and is very important pertaining to the increase of this injustice in the US. Especially with the abortions being difficult and illegalized, women are increasingly being unfairly held responsible for miscarriages and stillbirths. I especially like your intersectional analysis and case study of Regina McKnight, that showed the classist and racialized dynamics at play. I think that the introduction should be a bit longer, including a short summary of what your later points are trying to achieve. By this I mean that the fetus over human rights sections and intersectionality should be introduced in the introduction. Also, I think that the case study should be a sub-section of intersectionality (you do this by making the title a smaller heading), as it is more of an example than a 4th point. I've learned quite a bit from reading this, and am glad that you chose to persue this important SJ issue.