Revising the introduction

This is a great post. I would do some rewording in the introduction. From the first sentence, the word "recently' suggests that the post is going to be about contemporary trends in Korean feminism. In fact, you go into the history of feminism in Korea from the start of the 20th century. I think your opening line should reflect the scope of your article, which discusses history AND very recent trends. I would also advise you to structure the rest of your introduction similarly to how you've structured the larger post. I just think somehow it would be good to capture the four main headings of post in the introduction: History, Commercialization, Ongoing Struggles, and the Women's Movement.