Sub-headings, statistics, and citations

Sub-headings, statistics, and citations

Hey! Awesome work on your wiki so far-- I really enjoyed reading it!! I just had a couple ideas that may improve your wiki. First, the titles of your sub-headings are quite long. In preparation for this assignment, I was reading up on how to create an effective wiki page and one of the suggestions was to make sure your headings are concise and informative for your reader. Perhaps shortening them to the topic before discussing it (I.e. changing "The salary and women's performance at work is unequal" to "Salary and Women's Performance", then going on to explain how/why it is unequal) might make your discussion more coherent to your audience. Just a thought, though! Secondly, I think including a "statistics" section might be helpful for your wiki, where you can put relevant information regarding, say, income disparities, discrimination statistics, etc.. I suggest this to everyone, really, but as a reader I find it so helpful when concepts are displayed in a statistical manner because it rally demonstrates the real-world relevance of these topics! Lastly, I noticed in citation 6 (the article by Nicole Fortin) there are two sets of quotation marks around the title of the article. Just a minor thing, but I thought I would share because I know how easy those things are to miss! Overall, great job!

AlizaMarieSmith (talk)19:53, 26 July 2020