Discrimination against Transgender and Nonbinary Peoples in Pakistan

Hi,

I know you mentioned this is a rough draft but I think you're off to a good start! First formatting-wise I wanted to suggest you link all your sources through the wiki function so they all appear at the bottom of your article. I don't think you need separate headings for background and history as I feel they'd be slightly redundant, but I would also include subheadings for the sources of the discrimination (i.e. religion, government, media, class) and this would allow you to assess these factors from an intersectional lens.

I would also avoid using generic quotes, for example "In the words of one person" or "In the words of a legal scholar" - I think you could paraphrase these in your article to use as examples but not in the descriptive wiki text itself unless its quoted from a very influential/well-known person or politician involved in the movement.

Hope this helps!