Discrimination against Transgender and Nonbinary Peoples in Pakistan

Hi there,

Your topic of choice is very interesting, and one that I've never really pondered on my own. While we are progressing in the acceptance of transgender and nonbinary people in North America, it is always important to keep in mind what is going on across the world. In regards to your layout as you've expressed that you may need some input, I think it could be good to separate background and history. In background, you could discuss the general definitions of transgender and nonbinary and briefly discuss the common experiences faced by these individuals. Then, under history, you can go more in-depth with the history of those individuals in Pakistan who face discrimination. Your other subheadings are super interesting. I think that with more information they will be very effective in conveying the intersectional experience of individuals in Pakistan. Perhaps, it could be better to put "Recent Legal Recognition" last to end on a more positive note rather than going back to a negative place of intersectional discrimination. Just a thought! I hope this is helpful to you!

You're off to a great start. I'm sure that your final draft will be great and I'm looking forward to reading it.