Feedback

Hi,

I like your article so far, it's very concise and well done. One suggestion I have would be to go into the background and sources of the discrimination. I know it might be hard to fit in the word count but I would love to learn about the discrimination they faced post WWII when USA-Japan tensions were really high... or potentially their portrayal in the media contributing to the discrimination. Overall its really well done and I especially liked your analysis of eroticizing and fetishizing of Asian American women.

Thanks!