Citations

Hi Fion, I too enjoyed the table you created discussing the different types of discrimination. It was short and sweet and visually pleasing because it wasn't a big chunk of text. It was a good choice doing this as it creates a break from all the other text around it.

Although it is a draft, there were a few sentences that were repeated as if copy-pasted. Remember to give your final copy a proof read!

Also, "Although the intent behind exoticizing and fetishizing Asian American women is not malicious (usually originates from a positive intent), it has serious detrimental effects on the mental well-being of women that receive those comments"

if you are able to explain how it is positive intent, I feel as if this sentence can possibly rub the reader in the wrong direction. It might be better to remove this sentence and continue on with the next one. It's easy to misunderstand and took myself a few times to reread to understand. Although exoticizing and fetishizing can seem harmless, it can be seen as quite a sensitive topic that is easily misconstrued if not explained thoroughly.