Suggestions

Hi Fiona, I have a few suggestions regarding your wiki page. First, I think adding diagrams, pictures, and graphs to your wiki page could make your topic more interesting. Second, it's vital to add information on the history of one child policy in China and also the current state of the policy. Third, I think the bibliography isn't needed if you have references already. Also, I felt that your wiki was written in a format of an essay rather than a wiki page. You have used words that are usually used in essays but not in wiki pages (words such as: regardless, although.. etc). You have also included 'conclusion' part, which Wiki pages usually do not have. Furthermore, your references aren't cited properly in the correct format. All the references should have the same footnote, if you use the same reference more than once.