Suggestions

Suggestions

Hi!

I think you chose a very interesting topic! I do not know if this is something you are interested in but I would even further define individual acculturation by possibly mentioning the different types. I think this will help people better understanding what acculturation is really about. You could even have a section for each type. What I mean by this is have a section about group acculturation and a section about individual acculturation where you define integration, assimilation, separation, and marginalization. This will add more depth to your page. Also, I think that it is great that you used two different novels to explain and support your idea, however, it may be beneficial to split the large paragraphs into smaller sections. That way it will be easier to read and follow along. Other than that your page looks amazing! I like that you go very into depth with the novels.

-Manraj Dhanda

ManrajDhanda (talk)04:57, 11 November 2017