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Suggestions 004:57, 11 November 2017
Peer feedback017:57, 10 November 2017



I think you chose a very interesting topic! I do not know if this is something you are interested in but I would even further define individual acculturation by possibly mentioning the different types. I think this will help people better understanding what acculturation is really about. You could even have a section for each type. What I mean by this is have a section about group acculturation and a section about individual acculturation where you define integration, assimilation, separation, and marginalization. This will add more depth to your page. Also, I think that it is great that you used two different novels to explain and support your idea, however, it may be beneficial to split the large paragraphs into smaller sections. That way it will be easier to read and follow along. Other than that your page looks amazing! I like that you go very into depth with the novels.

-Manraj Dhanda

04:57, 11 November 2017

Peer feedback

Hey! I like your topic and thinks it's really interesting. You seem to just be discussing acculturation in Out on Main Street and Kiss of the Fur Queen. I would suggest either exploring more about acculturation outside those books or make it more clear In the introduction you will only be discussing acculturation within the parameters of those books.

17:57, 10 November 2017