Sections 1.5 and 1.6 could use further editing!
Fragment of a discussion from Course talk:PSYC305/2013ST2/ClassProject/2.2.1 Introduction - GD Studies
Hi Schuolee, both your sections are very well-written. I don't think we can cut it down even more without sacrificing key points from the study. I just made a few grammar edits though!
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