Sections 1.5 and 1.6 could use further editing!
Hello! I've added a summary of the "Gender-Related Traits of Heterosexual and Homosexual Men and Women" study which looks at differences in gay and heterosexual men's and lesbian and heterosexual women's occupational preferences and self-ascribed masculinity-feminity. Again, like the summary of the MBA Income study I completed yesterday, this is completely open to editing and refinement. I've edited it a few times in my own word processor and I'm at a point where everything looks too valuable to cut. Another set of eyes to make this entry more concise would be helpful, thanks!
Hi Schuolee, both your sections are very well-written. I don't think we can cut it down even more without sacrificing key points from the study. I just made a few grammar edits though!