Update

Yes thanks Jaimie; would someone like to take a crack at reducing that second paragraph?

I'm working on shortening the second paragraph. I'll post in the discussion board again when I'm finished so everyone can check it over.

I've shortened the length of the second paragraph, but I'm not sure if I cut out too much information about calculating gender diagnosticity or not. Any thoughts on this?

I think it looks great Selena: it's direct and economical. Well done! cheers Kevin