Group Work
Hey Everyone,
I just finished my slides, so please take a look over them whenever you have a chance and let me know if you have any suggestions for improving them. Henry, I looked over your slides and they look really good! The only thing I would suggest is adding a discussion on the molecular and cellular determinants of whether each bacteria induces an extracellular or intracellular infection. For example, S. aureus requires some form of trauma and specific attachment to induce an intracellular infection; whereas, S. pyogenes induces an intracellular infection to utilize trafficking mechanisms to other parts of the body. Let me know what you think about this.
Also, Joey and Harsh, when were you thinking of finishing your slides and the compare/contrast chart by? Just post a quick message whenever you are done, so we can do a final read through, make edits and finish referencing it!
Hasrit
Give me about an hour and I'll be done!
Sounds good Hasrit. I was working the whole day, didn't have a chance to work on the slides much. I'll do it as soon as I'm home. Thanks for taking the time to look over them! I think we're in good shape guys!
Henry
Sorry for the delay, I uploaded my section but I'm not done uploading my references. Since my section is the last...should I upload my references after the other sections have been done? I'm just afraid it wont be in order and it might confused people.
By the way, SciWeek EXO VANIC is tmr at 8pm, so I won't be able to do anything after that time. I'll be free the entire day to work on this before that though, so let me know if you guys want me to do anything!
Once again, sorry for the delayed upload of slides. SciWeek is quite hectic haha
Yea, I agree. The slides look, but maybe just try adding a few pictures to help students understand concepts. I think once Harsh is able to upload the slides for the first part and reference them, I can reference mine and then Henry and finally Joey, you can reference yours. This way, we can ensure that everything is in order (if we are doing the numbered format of referencing). If we are doing just normal APA, then we can reference whenever. Harsh, can we get an update on when your slides will be uploaded?
Hasrit
I just have the last sub-question left and will be done within an hour or so. For the summary slide, I was planning on waiting until we were all finished so I would be able to gather all the info. I will start on the summary slide today and finish summarizing all the info currently in the slides by the end of today. Also, can you guys do a read through of the first question and let me know what you think I should add or if it is good as is.
Harsh
Hi Harsh,
I feel like there might be a bit too much text in some of your slides. If you could cut them down and make them more abridged and in point form that would be great! Thank you!
Hasrit, I think we should go through all the slides tonight and make sure everything is consistent in terms of citations (like you said) and in terms of stuff like the order in which a bacteria is introduced in the slides. Let's get this done tonight guys!
Henry
Hi Harsh,
I think everyone's slides are completed (the information at least), so you can start the summary slide whenever you are ready. Have you gotten started on the chart yet (or is that what you mean by the summary slides)? I agree with Henry that your slides and information look good, maybe just try cutting some of the information down to make the presentation look cleaner.
I am going to cite all of my slides now and will just add the references to the references section. We can organize the references tomorrow when everyone has completed theirs. We should also go through all the slides and make everything consistent as Henry pointed out. This includes making the structure (bullet points, order of things, references and images) consistent with each other.
Great work everyone, we are almost done!
Hey, I have finished up the organization of the references up until the last question as they weren't listed yet and I will upload the summary slides mid-day tomorrow after a bit of editing. I also tried to make the slides as consistent in structure as I could in terms of the organization, font, color and such. Take a look and see if there is anymore editing to be done.
Harsh
Hey Harsh,
Great job on the editing! It looks good. I guess we are still waiting on Joey to add some pictures and finish his referencing. I will try to add some pictures in for him. Hopefully we can get this finalized soon.
Hey Guys,
I just went through the slides again and made everything consistent. I added two pictures to joey's slides. Joey, some of your slides don't quite make sense, so maybe try expanding on a few of the points. I'll make a note of them in each slide that I had trouble with. Also, try to organize the slides a little bit better because they don't quite flow well.
Hey guys,
I went through the slides again and made some minor changes including formatting and grammar (for the first three sections). I think everything looks really good for the first three sections. The last section needs some work as we still need to make some changes to content and reference. Joey are you going to be able to do this?! If not, can someone do this. I might not be able to as I won't be home until later tonight. I think once we are done that last section, we can submit it. Also, we just need to add in that final summarizing slide/chart, which I believe Harsh will add in soon. Great job, we are almost done!
Yeah unfortunately I'm going to be working all day today until about 10:30PM tonight. So I may not have the chance to work on it.
I'm on it, sorry about that
Great, thanks Joey. Once the referencing and the final few slides are fixed up and the final summary chart is posted, would someone be able to post the final presentation before 12? I don't think I'll be back before 12, so I probably won't be able to do it. Thanks in advance!