Suggestions
Hi, Ritika,
Wonderful draft! Lots of examples and detailed explanation make it easy to understand the algorithm. Here are my scores, with some suggestions below that. Scale of 1 to 5, where 1 = strongly disagree and 5 = strongly agree:
- (5) The topic is relevant for the course.
- (4) The writing is clear and the English is good.
- (5) The page is written at an appropriate level for CPSC 522 students (where the students have diverse backgrounds).
- (4) The formalism (definitions, mathematics) was well chosen to make the page easier to understand.
- (4) The abstract is a concise and clear summary.
- (4) There were appropriate (original) examples that helped make the topic clear.
- (n) There was appropriate use of (pseudo-) code.
- (4) It had a good coverage of representations, semantics, inference and learning (as appropriate for the topic).
- (4.5) It is correct.
- (4) It was neither too short nor too long for the topic.
- (4) It was an appropriate unit for a page (it shouldn't be split into different topics or merged with another page).
- (3.5) It links to appropriate other pages in the wiki.
- (3.5) The references and links to external pages are well chosen.
- (4) I would recommend this page to someone who wanted to find out about the topic.
- (3.5) This page should be highlighted as an exemplary page for others to emulate.
Suggestions:
- 1.It is better to add math tag to variables that in the paragraph.
- 2.Abstract can be more concise. Maybe put some contents in other sections.
- 3. It is better to give some pseudo code for the the algorithm.
Sincerely,
YuYan
Thank you for your comments YuYan. I shall try to incorporate your suggestions in improving my page. Thanks and regards, Ritika
RitikaJain (talk)