Peer Reviews
I think this is a very well written and organized page. The fact that we just learned about value of information in the class made reading it even more smooth for me.
I saw two very minor issues which I think are not mentioned in the previous comments: In the "Value of Control" section, I think using the word "similar to" instead of "like" is better. Also, in the last sentence of the page (the sentence right above "Annotated Bibliography") the part of the sentence after ", and the importance of ..." should be changed to contain a verb.
Another minor point which I did not quite understand is in the "Control with Parents Maintained" section. I actually did not understand what it means to maintain all the parents. In the example from the page on decision networks, Weather is not connected to Umbrella, but when you have converted Forecast to a controlled variable, a link has been added from Weather to Umbrella. I think a little more explanation of what maintaining the parents means will make me clear about this section.