Suggestions
Hi Yaashaar,
A solid draft that I learned a lot of Information Visualization stuff. Here are some suggestions:
- It is better to add some motivating examples for the page to make it is easier to understand.
- In Highlight Study section, I think put the Research Questions before Research Procedure is easier to understand.
Other parts are great.
Bests,
YuYan
Hi YuYan,
Thank you very much for reading my page and your kind suggestions:
- In the first paragraph of the introduction section, I tried to elaborate the case where User Adaptive Systems are appreciated as some questions which establish the foundation of this field. As this assignment was about reviewing two papers, I tried to be loyal to the material of the papers and just evaluate them in conclusion sections. I didn't find presenting a separate motivational example, any useful as two concrete and complete cases (experiments) are reviewed.
- You're right, I just changed its position to be presented before the procedure section.
Thanks again for your valuable suggestions ;)
Yaashaar