Suggestions

Suggestions

Hi Yaashaar,

A solid draft that I learned a lot of Information Visualization stuff. Here are some suggestions:

  1. It is better to add some motivating examples for the page to make it is easier to understand.
  2. In Highlight Study section, I think put the Research Questions before Research Procedure is easier to understand.

Other parts are great.

Bests,

YuYan

YuYan1 (talk)07:34, 10 March 2016

Hi YuYan,
Thank you very much for reading my page and your kind suggestions:

  1. In the first paragraph of the introduction section, I tried to elaborate the case where User Adaptive Systems are appreciated as some questions which establish the foundation of this field. As this assignment was about reviewing two papers, I tried to be loyal to the material of the papers and just evaluate them in conclusion sections. I didn't find presenting a separate motivational example, any useful as two concrete and complete cases (experiments) are reviewed.
  2. You're right, I just changed its position to be presented before the procedure section.


Thanks again for your valuable suggestions ;)
Yaashaar

Yaashaar HadadianPour (talk)09:19, 14 March 2016