Critique 2
An Interesting article covering text summarization. Here are some of the suggestions to improve the page:
- Words like concept counting and topic signatures may need further explanations or hyperlinks.
- Some of the symbols used in the equations are not explained (BD, BP, D, P).
- Some of the sentences need restructuring. I suggest Grammarly, to correct minor errors.
- The topic is relevant for the course. 5
- The writing is clear and the English is good. 4
- The page is written at an appropriate level for CPSC 522 students (where the students have diverse backgrounds). 5
- The formalism (definitions, mathematics) was well chosen to make the page easier to understand. 4
- The abstract is a concise and clear summary. 5
- There were appropriate (original) examples that helped make the topic clear. 4
- There was appropriate use of (pseudo-) code. 4
- It had a good coverage of representations, semantics, inference, and learning (as appropriate for the topic). 5
- It is correct. 5
- It was neither too short nor too long for the topic. 5
- It was an appropriate unit for a page (it shouldn't be split into different topics or merged with another page). 5
- It links to appropriate other pages in the wiki. 5
- The references and links to external pages are well chosen. 4
- I would recommend this page to someone who wanted to find out about the topic. 4
- This page should be highlighted as an exemplary page for others to emulate. 4
If I was grading it out of 20, I would give it: 17
KevinDsouza (talk)
Hi Kevin,
Thanks for the feedback. I have updated my Wiki page based on your three suggestions. Hopefully, now it will be easier to read for any new reader.
EktaAggarwal (talk)