Critiques and Suggestions

Critiques and Suggestions

Hi Mehrdad,

Such a well written and solid draft! Here are my scores and more details below that. Please let me know if you need any further clarification.
Scale of 1 to 5, where 1 = strongly disagree and 5 = strongly agree:


[5] The topic is relevant for the course.
[5] The writing is clear and the English is good.
[5] The page is written at an appropriate level for CPSC 522 students (where the students have diverse backgrounds).
[4] The formalism (definitions, mathematics) was well chosen to make the page easier to understand.
[5] The abstract is a concise and clear summary.
[3.5] There were appropriate (original) examples that helped make the topic clear.
[3] There was appropriate use of (pseudo-) code.
[4] It had a good coverage of representations, semantics, inference and learning (as appropriate for the topic).
[5] It is correct.
[4] It was neither too short nor too long for the topic.
[4] It was an appropriate unit for a page (it shouldn't be split into different topics or merged with another page).
[5] It links to appropriate other pages in the wiki.
[4] The references and links to external pages are well chosen.
[5] I would recommend this page to someone who wanted to find out about the topic.
[4] This page should be highlighted as an exemplary page for others to emulate.

Comments:[wikitext]

I enjoyed reading this page, however, I believe this page can use the following suggestions:

An Original Motivational Example

An original motivational example can be presented to summarize the learning materials, especially for this page that has required grounds for an example to be built upon.

Focus

As Adnan already suggested, there is a dedicated page for RL. Therefore, you might want to expand the function approximation part and pay less attention to RL itself.

Images quality

The quality of figures that are used is a bit low. You may want to find replacements with higher qualities or redraw them.

Captions

You may want to use captions for figures to briefly explain what they illustrate.

Mathematical Equation

I suggest you to replace the images of equations and expressions with Math tags, to let them following the policy of the stylesheet of the wiki.


Aside from above suggestions, you did a great job.


Sincerely,
Yaashaar Hadadian

Yaashaar HadadianPour (talk)07:36, 7 February 2016

Thanks for your fantastic feedback Yaashaar, will try to improve my page as we go.

MehrdadGhomi (talk)01:00, 15 February 2016