Critique

Hi Ricky,

Good job. Your page is concise and clear. The layout is also good. I learned a lot from your page and I really like the pictures you put in your page. But Analysis Section seems confusing. You'd better add a separate Conclusion Section or just change it to Conclusion Section. And Background Section should be changed into Builds on Section.

Sincerely,

Ke Dai

True, the analysis is scattered around in the wiki. I've changed that section header to Conclusion.