Critique

Cool topic. Abstract and related works can be added. A more detailed background information can help the reader. The future work sections is interesting. You should also add a few references and internal wiki links.

• The topic is relevant for the course. 5
• The writing is clear and the English is good. 5
• The page is written at an appropriate level for CPSC 522 students (where the students have diverse backgrounds). 4
• The formalism (definitions, mathematics) was well chosen to make the page easier to understand. 4
• The abstract is a concise and clear summary. 0
• There were appropriate (original) examples that helped make the topic clear. 3 specific examples where the system could be useful?
• There was appropriate use of (pseudo-) code. 0
• It is correct. 3 I think some more detail is needed
• It was neither too short nor too long for the topic. 3 a bit short
• It was an appropriate unit for a page (it shouldn't be split into different topics or merged with another page). 5
• It links to appropriate other pages in the wiki. 4
• The references and links to external pages are well chosen. 0
• I would recommend this page to someone who wanted to find out about the topic. 3
• This page should be highlighted as an exemplary page for others to emulate. 3

If I was grading it out of 20, I would give it: 15