Critique

Hi Ke Dai, Thank you for your feedback. I also took a look at your page and I liked it. I can definitely take some pointers from your page. As far as the conclusion section, I mentioned it in the discussion that I do not have substantial information to give a definitive answer but enough to mention that this is a interesting development to further explore. I do agree I could have been a bit more clear. I would definitely try to improve it.