My comments and critique:

Hi Arthur,

Firstly, let me thank for your project and your contribution in CPSC 522 Wiki pages. I like your page and find your topic of project interesting. I like to share my opinion and give you my comments, maybe they might help you.

1) First of you can treat this assignment's wiki page as a research paper and include the usual and common sections such as: abstract, motivation, introduction, method, evaluation, results, conclusion, future work and acknowledgment. 2) Maybe snapshots are not the most suitable way of presenting data a figure in my opinion. 3) Maybe put all the codes and pseudo-codes in file or link and just give a pointer link to that. 4) Maybe add some areas for future work or possible areas of improvement. 5) Finally, I really want to see the reference section. it really adds value.

Thanks for your page it was a pleasure to read it and I hope these comments can help you improve your contribution.

Mehrdad Ghomi

Hi Mehrada,

I have already reviewed the format and changed according to your advisefor the 1,2,3,4,5 points. Thank you for your advise to make my paper more professional!

Regards Arthur