Suggestion

Suggestion

Hi Yu Yan,

Great job. I appreciate your work on this topic although there are still many contents I do not understand. I have a suggesion for you. In this page you use many mathematical equations and symbols which make it hard for people without any background knowledge to understand the ideas and concepts. I hope you can use more plain statements and fewer mathematical equations to make this page less technical and academic.

Sincerely,

Ke Dai

KeDai (talk)07:32, 5 February 2016

Hi, Ke Dai, thanks for your feedback. I will try to add more plain statements to make these mathematical equations easier to understand. I will let you know when I am done with that.

YuYan

YuYan1 (talk)08:23, 5 February 2016