Suggestions

Suggestions

Hi Jiahong,

Good job!

Here are a few suggestions:


>Centrality Ranking Based Corporate Network Analysis And Top-K Corporation Extraction

This subject is too long. It might be better to choose a shorter subject for this section.

What are the contents of this subject? I did not get what you have tried to put here. In the suggested template we were asked to explain the page in one sentence. The content of this section looks like what we usually put in the abstract section. In this case you can add it to the abstract part.

>Abstract

This section is great. I got the whole idea in just one paragraph.


>Introduction

What I understood from this section is that because of some reasons (mentioned in your page) in order to make a weighted graph lots of things should be considered. But I did not get why you build an un-weighted graph? (Is it just for simplicity? Or maybe you did not have enough data to decide about the weight.)


I liked how you explain the methodology and experimental results.

A quick proofread might help you.

BahareFatemi (talk)19:35, 20 April 2016

Hi Bahare,


Thank you for your suggestions!

1) Yes, it seems a bit too long, I will try to figure out a shorter one. Also, I will try to write more brief summary for the page. Thanks.

2) I assume that the weighted graph is as important as the unweight one. However, due to the lack of time, I only able to carry out tests and evaluations on the unweighted graph. Sorry about that.

Again, thank you so much for your kindly suggestions!


Best regards,

Jiahong Chen

JiahongChen (talk)04:33, 21 April 2016