Critique

Hi Prithu,

Good job. The content of this page is great and I learned a lot. But I think the hierarchy or layout of this page need be redesigned. Here are my suggestions:

• Experiments and Training Section should not be under Hypothesis Section. From my perspective, Hypothesis Section should be concise and short and Experiments and Training can be put in a implementation section.
• Conclusion Section is missing.
• Builds on should be under Abstract Section like the template page.
• It seems that you have not still finished Background Knowledge Section.

Sincerely,

Ke Dai

Thanks for your feedback Kedai. Experiments and Training Section should not be under Hypothesis Section. From my perspective, Hypothesis Section should be concise and shot and Experiments and Training can be put in a implementation section.

Not sure what you mean. I saw experiment as an empirical validation of my hypothesis. And found it easy to link in that way. Hope that keeps the flow alright

Conclusion Section is missing.

I have a discussion section instead :)

It seems that you have not still finished Background Knowledge Section.

Should be alright. Can you make sure you are looking at the latest snapshot.

best, Prithu