Critique 2

A very interesting and well-articulated topic. The introduction and the conclusion are spot on and give enough background to the reader. Here are some of my suggestions to improve the page:

1. Increase the size of the images so that they are readable
2. It would be nice to see some of the explanation replaced by mathematical formulations so that it's easier to follow
3. An explanation of the figures with reference may be required

• The topic is relevant for the course. 5
• The writing is clear and the English is good. 5
• The page is written at an appropriate level for CPSC 522 students (where the students have diverse backgrounds). 5
• The formalism (definitions, mathematics) was well chosen to make the page easier to understand. 3
• The abstract is a concise and clear summary. 5
• There were appropriate (original) examples that helped make the topic clear. 4
• There was appropriate use of (pseudo-) code. 4
• It had a good coverage of representations, semantics, inference, and learning (as appropriate for the topic). 5
• It is correct. 5
• It was neither too short nor too long for the topic. 4
• It was an appropriate unit for a page (it shouldn't be split into different topics or merged with another page). 5
• It links to appropriate other pages in the wiki. 4
• The references and links to external pages are well chosen. 5
• I would recommend this page to someone who wanted to find out about the topic. 5
• This page should be highlighted as an exemplary page for others to emulate. 4

If I was grading it out of 20, I would give it: 18