Critiques and Suggestions
Hi Yan Zhao,
Such a concise and easy to understand review! Here are my scores and more details below that. Please let me know if you need any further clarification.
Scale of 1 to 5, where 1 = strongly disagree and 5 = strongly agree:
[5] The topic is relevant for the course.
[4] The writing is clear and the English is good.
[4] The page is written at an appropriate level for CPSC 522 students (where the students have diverse backgrounds).
[3] The formalism (definitions, mathematics) was well chosen to make the page easier to understand.
[4] The abstract is a concise and clear summary.
[2] There were appropriate (original) examples that helped make the topic clear.
[4.5] There was appropriate use of (pseudo-) code.
[3] It had a good coverage of representations, semantics, inference and learning (as appropriate for the topic).
[4.5] It is correct.
[3] It was neither too short nor too long for the topic.
[3] It was an appropriate unit for a page (it shouldn't be split into different topics or merged with another page).
[5] It links to appropriate other pages in the wiki.
[5] The references and links to external pages are well chosen.
[3.5] I would recommend this page to someone who wanted to find out about the topic.
[2] This page should be highlighted as an exemplary page for others to emulate.
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I enjoyed reading this page, however, I believe this page can use the following suggestions:
A Practical and Motivational Example
An original motivational example can be presented to summarize the learning materials, especially for this page that has required grounds for an example to be built upon it.
As other reviewers mentioned before, a reader probably is interested in knowing how decision network is being used in practice.
A Little Too Concise
I found this page to be a little too concise:
- You probably can expand it by putting more insight into each section and/or applying the materials to a practical example.
- You might want to add a section to discuss its usage in a realistic case. You might want to just briefly describe it and then refer the readers to appropriate external links for more details.
Good job,
Yaashaar Hadadian