Critique

My main concern with this article is that it doesn't actually *test* a hypothesis....

The effect of hypothetical 0-cost AI labor replacing human labor - any thoughts on how that would mold society? Basic minimum income? Class stratification? Revolution?

Read through the article and each section seems indispensable. Very nice flow too wouldn't want to make it choppy just for the sake of shortening it. Possibly replace quotes with shorter sentences in your words. Possibly remove explicit references to literature and just cite sentences describing what you want to say.