Feedback

Hi Rosie, Thanks for the feedback. I tried to incorporate outreach throughout my wiki but I agree that I need to discuss outreach more directly. I think it will be difficult for me to create a specific outreach section at this point, but I will try to add in more content for outreach. Thanks again!

Hello again!

So much improvement from last time! You've done well. I only have a couple of comments this time.

1) Watch for general grammatical errors.

2) Do you need to cite the address of an archives? I think it counts as common knowledge.

Good luck!

Thanks for pointing out the reference issue. I have gone through again and rechecked my grammar. Thanks for the feedback!