Feedback

Hey, Kaitlin!

You have a great start so far. You've done a lot with not a lot of information, and I'm impressed!

At this point, I have some very general notes. Most of it has to do with expansion. I like that you included online exhibits. It shows that kinds of outreach that the Nova Scotia Archives are willing to participate in. The problem, of course, is that online exhibits can come and go. So what's special about these ones, that they've gained mention?

You may also benefit from adding sections about Outreach in general. I've gone through the Nova Scotia Archives website for a different class, I saw quite a bit.

Very good start, Kaitlin!

Best!

Rosie Bigelow (talk)‎

Hi Rosie, Thanks for the feedback. I tried to incorporate outreach throughout my wiki but I agree that I need to discuss outreach more directly. I think it will be difficult for me to create a specific outreach section at this point, but I will try to add in more content for outreach. Thanks again!

KaitlinWood (talk)‎

Hello again!

So much improvement from last time! You've done well. I only have a couple of comments this time.

1) Watch for general grammatical errors.

2) Do you need to cite the address of an archives? I think it counts as common knowledge.

Good luck!

Rosie Bigelow (talk)‎

Thanks for pointing out the reference issue. I have gone through again and rechecked my grammar. Thanks for the feedback!

KaitlinWood (talk)‎