A few small suggestions...

Thanks for the feedback Katie, I've fixed up the first three areas you've suggested. I'll look into breaking up the V&A Museum section, it did take on a bit of a life of its own once I started reading about all the different components, just curious do mean I could maybe add sub-headings? Or just page breaks to make the paragraphs more well-defined? -Taryn

I just meant page breaks between the paragraphs.

Perfect, thanks Katie!