A few small suggestions...
Hi Taryn,
Great job so far! The entry is very well structured and interesting to read. And I like the title of your section "Archives in Action" - nice change from Case Studies.
A few thoughts I has while reading this:
-In the Museum Context section, in the sentence “There are two main functions a museum performs, those relating to its curatorial duties, and those relating to their administrative duties” you switch from "its" to "their." Should probably be "its" in both places.
-Also in the Museum Context section, you reference a Wythe for the first time in the article. It seems like you should give his/her first name as well and perhaps a title of some kind (archivist?)
-The statistics "nearly 55,000 museums in the world, in 202 different countries” should probably be cited.
-The V&A Museum section could benefit from being broken up a bit (it looks like there should be a few paragraphs?)
Katie
Thanks for the feedback Katie, I've fixed up the first three areas you've suggested. I'll look into breaking up the V&A Museum section, it did take on a bit of a life of its own once I started reading about all the different components, just curious do mean I could maybe add sub-headings? Or just page breaks to make the paragraphs more well-defined? -Taryn