Feedback
Kelly,
Oh my gosh, you added a lot! The page is really impressive! I adore it, it's very broad, and you obviously worked hard on it.
A couple of general notes: I noticed some minor grammatical errors, nothing serious. Also, I noticed your Native American section is still blank. It's an important topic, and a big one. I'm kinda torn between wanting you to cut it (for your sanity), or filling it out (for the strength of the page). It's definitely a rabbit hole situation, and if you're wavering, I'd suggest just giving a short blurb.
Everything else is very strong. You're doing well.
Good luck!
Hi Rosie,
Thanks for the feedback. My page has a lot of spelling/grammer errors, correcting those will be the last step! I finally finished the section on First Nations which kind of morphed into a section on social justice and the TRC. If you or others have any thoughts on it I'd like to hear them.
Kelly